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Best Pony: Pinkie Pie

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My new Picture!!! I sooo happy like Pinkie Pie herself ^____^

SMILE SMILE SMILE!!!
Go Gummi its your Birthday! Go Gummi its your Birthday! Go Gummi its your Birthday! Go Gummi its your Birthday! Go Gummi its your Birthday! Go Gummi its your Birthday! Go Gummi its your Birthday! and so on...

Oh and make a Critiques if you have the time :D ...
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

You have a nice focus of colors there. They belie that the background is essentially smudges, making it feel rich and full.
The expression on pinkie is joy, but it avoids going down creepy lane, which is a good thing.
Note: I'm not judging this one because if it's intentional it seems to work as background, merely if it's not intended then you can improve it next time. The balloons look off because of 2 reasons. 1 they are not rounded enough. Baloons are all curves, but yours have odd bumps. 2 they're bunched together as if they hit a glass ceiling. But they're not your focus, merely a medium for showing the energy here, so they work here.
Fine details which could be improved: I think Pinkie's nose is a bit too pointy. The imagery of that pointy a nose ends up being "stuck up."
Gummy looks off. I think that it's because you're going for too much detail in the mouth with those wrinkles and the lighting in the eyes. Gummy may be intended to be like the balloons in this work a background to flesh out Pinkie. If so, he needs to be less "real" OR you need the proportions to be better. The belly makes him look like he's swalllowed a balloon. The mouth can't decide if it's over or under the hair. The head/eye bulge looks flat.

I'd have gone for a generally flatter Gummy given those two choices so that he wouldn't fight with Pinkie for center stage.

Only because I'm not sure about these points does vision get rated less than a 5.

Only because it's a very typical Pinkie Pose does originality get a 4.

But those colors really deserve nothing less than 5 in impact.